well, this one's better, it sounds pretty good, specially the 2nd drop, and that melody shift at 1:47 is sick af, but I feel like the drums are parallel of the rest of the sounds, what I mean is that it doesn't blend with the other elements, like if they were a different track (see 3rd drop), I would recommend using a compressor in the master to balance the volume of the mix. It's a very good song tho

hmmm good stuff

yea sounds good

those red and black effects looks cool af

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those lines look gud